PAGE NUMBER LINE NUMBER SUGGESTED AMENDMENT
CONTENTS
3 10 Add hyphen in ‘Self negating’
3 21 After the ‘Wesley’ entry add ‘Conclusion………75’
4 3 Change ‘140’ to ‘141’
INTRODUCTION
16 4 Add comma before ‘Martin’
16 23 Add space after ‘Shaw’
CHAPTER 1
23 4 Change ‘a’ to ‘an’
35 3 delete ‘mutadis mutandis’
CHAPTER 2
41 Last on page ‘non conformist’ normally appears as ‘nonconformist’
42 5 Again change ‘non conformist’ to ‘nonconformist’ (you use the latter spelling in line 10 of this page)
43 4 Small point, but it looks as though the first letter of ‘Royal’ has not been italicised
43 11 Footnote number is wrong, should be ‘2’
43 15 After ‘veils’ insert footnote 3
43 19 After ‘Protestants’ insert footnote 4
46 10 Footnote is given as ‘2’ should be 7
47 16 Insert footnote 8 after ‘history’
48 5 Footnote number ‘3’ here is wrong, should be 9
48 8 Add hyphen in ‘anti authoritarian’
48 21 Remove ‘among others’ replace with ‘sometimes’
49 8 Add comma after ‘liberty’
49 18 Add comma after ‘Yobbery’
49 24 Footnote number ‘4’ is wrong, should be 10
50 2 Insert footnote 11 after ‘thereof’
51 14 Footnote number ‘5’ is wrong. Should be 12
53 9 Insert Footnote 13 after ‘Christian’
54 2 Add comma after ‘Worcester’, change ‘express’ to ‘expresses’
54 24 Footnote ‘6’, should be 14
55 21 Insert ‘to’ after ‘opposition’.
56 9 Add comma after ‘Aquinas’
56 13 Add hyphen in ‘pre war’
57 7 Add comma after ‘society’
57 14 Add ‘by’ or ‘of’ before ‘abolishing’
59 18 Add comma after ‘Catholic’
61 14 Take out comma after ‘vision’
62 22 Add hyphen in ‘pre rationalistic’
63 24 Add comma after ‘concerns’
66 15 Delete space after ‘1580s’
66 18 Add ‘to’ after ‘endearing’?
70 14 Add hyphen in ‘anti life’
74 12 Take out comma after ‘1760’
75 6 Add comma after ‘ignorant’
77 20 Change Human all to Human’ to ‘Human all too Human’
CHAPTER 3
80 15 Change ‘is’ to ‘are’.
107 11 Delete footnote 24
107 13 Footnote ‘17’ should be 24
109 4 Delete ‘in’
122 21 Change ‘and’ to ‘an’
123 20 Footnote 37 shold be 36
125 13 Footnote 38 should be 37
127 18 Footnote 39 should be 38
130 16 Add ‘a’ before ‘successful’
131 14 Change ‘us’ to ‘is’
131 21 Remove comma after ‘philosophy’
137 13 Change ‘an’ to ‘and’
CHAPTER 4
142 11 ‘if’ should be ‘of’
144 3 Delete comma after ‘become’
145 20 ‘Paying’ should read ‘playing’
146 2 Add hyphen after ‘anti’
147 16 ‘a’ should be ‘an’
148 13 Add comma after ‘Empire’
148 21 Footnote ‘8’ actually relates to Note ‘9’
149 11 Footnote ‘9’ actually relates to Note ‘8’
150 8 change footnote ‘7’ to ’10
152 11 and 13 There should be a hyphen after ‘non’ in both of these lines
153 12 This footnote ‘8’ should be changed to ‘14’
154 16 Add comma after ‘Kipling’
156 Last line on page Footnote ‘9’ should be changed to ‘15’
158 9 Footnote ’10 should be changed to ‘16’
158 Last line on page Footnote ‘17’ should be added to the text after ‘experiences’
159 18 Footnote ‘11’ should be ‘18’
160 25-30 Transpose footnotes 8 & 9
CHAPTER 5
165 5 Should ‘aids’ read ‘Aids’?
173 Last line on page Delete comma after ‘atmosphere’
175 1 Delete comma after ‘health’
175 10 After ‘Sex’ add ‘is’
178 8 For the sake of consistency change ’10,000’ to ‘ten thousand’
181 9 Change ‘aids to ‘Aids’?
184 5 Change ‘In the 1936’ to ‘In 1936’?
CHAPTER 6
190 18 Take out comma after ‘Crowleyana’
193 1 Add hyphen in ‘self denial’
195 24 On page 202 the note relating to this footnote ‘4’ reads ‘Ibid’. This refers back to note ‘2’, while there is a note (‘3’) referring to ‘Sanine’ in between. I think it would be clearer to restate the details in note ‘2’
201 15 Take out comma after ‘14’
216 Top of page For neatness the text and possibly page number should be removed (the following pages are blank)
